Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Raam Naam Satya Hein!


“Ram naam satya hein”
“Ram naam satya hein”
“Ram naam satya hein”

The old man saw a little girl repeating the same lines loudly.

She looked tired, hungry, and gloomy!

He went to her.

“Hey! Are you mad? Where is the dead body?”

“What do you mean by dead body?” The little girl asked.

- “Some people came and took my father with them last week and asked me to repeat these words till someone comes!”

9 comments:

  1. Very moving story! never would hv thought it possible to manage to pack it in so few words

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    1. Says the one who has a blog filled with great stuff. Thank you Suresh, glad you liked it. I love to manipulate my readers and surprise them at the end.

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  2. Gloomy and so difficult for a child to go through this. Well written...

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    1. I become the central character or the sufferer of my stories. I feel the pain before jotting down :) Thanks Saru! Keep visiting.

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  3. Wow!! You manage to evoke the best of emotions in the least possible words. Fantastic post!!

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    1. Thank you Ramakant. Your comments make me happy always!

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  4. Saying a lot in just a few words....
    Heart-touching!!

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